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Yogi
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0 posted 2003-05-31 03:16 PM


Butterflies Churn The Stomach Tight
When Loves Enters Your Sight
Light Headed, Knotted Soul
Can't Sleep, Eating Is A No No
Feeling The Sensation Of Flight
With No Wings, This Feels Right
In A Daze, But Your Eyes Are Closed
Vision Of Your Angel, While In Flight Up Close
Your Smile Never Leaves Your Face
Even When Sad Without Your Lovers Embrace
Sometimes Tears Fall, Oceans You Could Fill
When You Find Each Other Apart
Also When Walking On Air So light
This Four Lettered Word "LOVE"
Feels Just Right


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ethome
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1 posted 2003-05-31 03:19 PM


That's just about as good a description of the effects of love on the mental/physical side as I have ever read. Great format too.
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2 posted 2003-05-31 03:21 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too always love to each day lay in my bed and close my eyes and just dream of my dream girl that I dream to finally find and love and being held in her angel wings! (kiss on cheek) You descrive loves magic so beautifully, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Yogi, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2003-06-01 02:41 AM


wonderful description!
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4 posted 2003-06-01 12:31 PM


BRAVO! You've done a great job of presenting the emotional mixture of love's recipe.
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