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On The Premise Of Dawn
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On The Premise Of Dawn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 In the skip before the dawning there comes a light that commands this poet’s quill to dip the ink of poetic think while the parchment lays so still~ Then in a burst of color He signatures the day’s begin I now know why I’ve come, summoned, for this morning Masterpiece will never come my way again~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Marge .....True enough they're all different....great write! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, this is so beautiful. I love to come onto Passions and read such beauty and peace. Thank you for being you.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
It is just keeps getting better and better. I glad you captured the moment here. Just beautiful, Patricia |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge you certainly do get better & better. Love, Betty |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge, brilliant writing!!!! Your imagery just stunning. The way you use words always captivates and enchants me. ***Ivy Rose |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is so true. Each dawn holds its own delight! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful imagery. I just loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
how nice   liked this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so beautiful, as always |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
A delightfully true way to be reminded that each dawn offers us a new day! How often we tend to overlook such a gift! Beautifully expressed and artfully enhanced! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you for this capture... and for letting me sleep in. *G* Just beautiful, Marge. *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My dear, we both know, that moments like this are one of a kind, and kindly revisit. Smiles from TD |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, It's true it only happens once each day.   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wanted to see this again since I always miss the real thing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone~ This was and is a 'special' piece for me~ And Seymour ... yes, but NEVER any two the same~ Sort of like what you create with your brush and palette, eh ? *Huglets* to ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....morning is my favorite time...I love how you have captured it, never the same, just like poetry from your pen. |
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