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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-05-31 02:18 PM




'I am sorry, love.'

Those few words I heard from you.

Not what I hoped for.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-31 02:21 PM


short, sweet, terrific  

It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity.

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2 posted 2003-05-31 02:42 PM


MidniteSun~
A sad write ... written so well to the form~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2003-05-31 03:00 PM


I know what you mean my wife told me that the two hardest things to say were "I'm sorry" and "I love you"  I said, "no they're not dear, I'm sorry I love you!"

Don't know whether she understood???

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4 posted 2003-05-31 03:53 PM


Q, Marge thanks for reading and understanding.
Eric, it probably depends upon how and when you said that!

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5 posted 2003-05-31 03:56 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Very sad indeed; that to me is a rather clumsy response, especially for a liar or a hypocrite, who I wouldn't hesitate to slam a door in front of after they step out of the house, which I did to my sisters boyfriend after we found out he lied that he was going to college and really hadn't since November (she wanted me to do so)! (sad sigh) You speak with utmost compassion, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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6 posted 2003-05-31 04:08 PM


Yeeeowweeeee,  what a message...  You did
this exceptionally well..

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7 posted 2003-05-31 04:50 PM


Very touching Kacy. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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