Terpsichore's Implore... (a wee bit of tinkering)

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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-05-31 01:48 PM

Take my hand and fly with me,
...she called to him imploring,
Soar with me into the night,
...to world's unknown, exploring,
Ascending up to heaven's vault,
...'mid realm of god's exist,
To leave behind your earthen past,
...on wings of evening's mist.
As we climb on Luna's beams,
...crown jewel of heaven's bliss,
We'll touch upon the stars themselves,
...bright gems of dark's abyss,
Then sail across night's firmament,
...aboard the Southern Cross,
Past Orion and his flock,
...as Venus does emboss,
Upon us both her radiant splendor,
...glowing crystalline,
If only you will fly with me,
...and evermore be mine.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-05-31 01:49 PM

Well, did she fly with this one? What a nice write!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-05-31 01:58 PM

wonderful piece!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-05-31 04:06 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Tim, this is just beautifulo, Terpsichore has always been one of my favorite mythical characters, she truly has the music and poetry in her soul and she truly exists in every lovers heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry does more than implore, it explores, preplores, replores, I could just make up suffixes all day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-05-31 04:29 PM

Tim~
Were you to walk outside
I KNOW you'd hear this Southern *sigh*~

Lovely, lovely, lovely~
(Did I mention lovely ?)
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-05-31 04:31 PM

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2003-05-31 10:08 PM

from southern skies
you'll hear my sighs
your words emboss
our southern cross
with Terpsichore
and you I soar.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2003-06-01 12:04 PM

We'll touch upon the stars themselves,
...bright gems of dark's abyss,
Then sail across night's firmament,
...aboard the Southern Cross,
Past Orion and his flock,
...as Venus does emboss,
Upon us both her radiant splendor,
...glowing crystalline,
=============================

as always...impressive rhymes...masterful employ of vocabulary and personification and delightful ethereal imagery.
Excellence from your gifted pen, poet sir.

Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

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