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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-05-31 12:25 PM



It’s not that I don’t love you
no baby,
it’s that I love you....too much
and it’s in this time I ache
oh, I ache
for your touch
to the point
my soul becomes numb
I can’t fight these emotions
and so it is
I succumb....
reality blurs
to half fragments
there is no clarity
you are
all consuming
the very
doom of me.....
I’ve given in
to giving myself to you

              still......
                         always.....
                                    again.....



~SEA~


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1 posted 2003-05-31 01:07 PM



you are
all consuming
the very
doom of me.....

SEA - been there....felt this...thankyou for sharing these thoughts with us. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-05-31 01:12 PM


I know how that feels....trying to fight it even now
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3 posted 2003-05-31 04:12 PM




(sigh) I guess it's all in the moderation of passion to where we can find comfort, dearest friend, love truly is an amazing force and we can't help but contain it sometimes! (big hugggsssssssss) You speak of the dilemma of love so well, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-05-31 04:13 PM


Yes, and is that prefered or a a pain...James
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5 posted 2003-05-31 04:16 PM


very nice write,,  i enjoyed  

It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity.

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6 posted 2003-05-31 04:23 PM


SEA~
So GOOD to see you, gal~
Beautiful, as always~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2003-05-31 04:42 PM


Aw yes, but when you give in it's very nice isn't it......You know like the Bellamy Brothers sang...."Let Your Love Flow"
Nice write!

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8 posted 2003-05-31 04:43 PM


Chances are all of us knows that feeling...but it was fun to read

"Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain."

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9 posted 2003-05-31 05:58 PM


Sea...This is beautiful, heartfelt writing. You've so eloquently expressed what so many of us have felt about the person we are in love with.  ***Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2003-05-31 08:29 PM


enjoyed
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11 posted 2003-05-31 08:32 PM


SEA - nice to see you. You do write with a soft touch that just has your words give thoughts of your feelings...

BC

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12 posted 2003-05-31 09:02 PM


Susan...I know this feeling only too well.
Enjoyed reading you ...miss you!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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13 posted 2003-05-31 09:11 PM


I’ve given in
to giving myself to you

              still......
                         always.....
                                    again.....


Oh yes, Sea...I do know this.

I enjoyed reading you again. You've been
missed very much, Lady. Glad you're back.
Hugs,   :hugs;
Ethel



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14 posted 2003-05-31 11:12 PM


You are just way too good at this!  Sure do miss that about ya.  
SEA
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15 posted 2003-05-31 11:15 PM


thank you all very much...
and there is my Cowboy have missed you

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16 posted 2003-06-01 12:10 PM


love the surrender in this gem of pen Sea-girlie...cool font too.
So glad to see you been finding some time to write in between sod, meatloaf and bread LOL

Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

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17 posted 2003-06-01 02:12 AM


Susan,
=============================================
I’ve given in
to giving myself to you

              still......
                         always.....
                                   again.....

=============================================

Can I pretend you're writing for me? Such incredible thoughts wrapped into such a fine package. How I've missed your writing...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Charisma
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18 posted 2003-06-01 09:07 AM


beautiful heartmoving penned.
glad to catch your name once again dear friend

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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19 posted 2003-06-01 10:00 AM



I'm just so danged glad to see you back...that now I'll have to go back and read the poem...

Hugs, Mom

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20 posted 2003-06-01 10:23 AM


Very beautifully wrote.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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