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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-05-31 11:01 AM



Sharing, The Sea And The Moon

She's there I can  feel it,
brought sunshine this way.
Excitement is building
especially today,
as I begin packing
and check out my wear,
remembering our past and
first words we did share.

In common we were,
both dealing with young
and the heart written poems
that were many among
those friends new and old
when first posted my heart
of a time when it mattered
when I'd begin a new start.

Without those of you
and especially some
I would never have made it
this far to become
entangled in friendships
(the twist that is laced)
in soft hearted carings
and honesty faced.

It's those meetings of words,
then those seen in the real
that will tie us for always,
and strengthen like steel,
a "forever hold"
all those poets I've met.
Each one filling an empty
with a "never forget".

Those moments of reaching
to touch coming soon,
when Blues Serenade and I
share both Sea and the Moon.
For I was MMoonchild
when I met her as Sea,
as we shared painted words,
worlds from inside of We.

So if you don't see us much
for a couple of days,
left computers behind
while mind's turning a phrase
or two in the keeping,
until each departs.
Mores to do, without typing,
we're sharing our hearts.
M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-31-2003 11:02 AM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2003-05-31 11:10 AM


This is very lovely. And I wish  the Sea and the Moon a happy time together.
It's so nice when friendships are born here and when hearts share.
Much love, Margherita

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-05-31 11:22 AM


Enjoy the sun and the shores, most of all the warmth found in friendship.
Best friends and the beach...
What more do we need..
I know you two will have a wonderful visit.

Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-05-31 11:27 AM


Even if it rains, as it has just started to do (again) it will be raining warmth.

Thank you both. I wish so many others could have met the poets I have already. There is so much more to each than just words.

Smiling
M


Startime55
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4 posted 2003-05-31 11:48 AM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!! Have a wonderful time...

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2003-05-31 11:56 AM


This is....the definition of true friendship. Enjoy your time, for it will be well spent, and will no doubt yield much to bank upon in the future, to sustain both of you well beyond these blue pages.
This is a beautiful moment you've shared with the rest of us. Thank you!

Dreamless Decay
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since 2003-05-30
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MO
6 posted 2003-05-31 12:13 PM


Well, glad I stopped in and decided to read this one, most enlightening

"Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain."

Chanson
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7 posted 2003-05-31 12:16 PM


"It will be raining warmth"....soooo right you are! When friends visit with each other it doesn't matter what the weather is, what matters is the caring and sharing. With that in mind it can only be sunny! *s


Have a GREAT visit, M!

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just out of reach
8 posted 2003-05-31 01:11 PM


Awwww.....have a great time you two. This is a beautiful write Maureen. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-05-31 01:14 PM


hope you have a wonderful time together, and come back soon
nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-05-31 07:26 PM


Thank you all...haven't left yet.

The heavens are unloading on us right now, and I believe the Gods are angry. I hope Lori isn't in the middle of this downpour.

M



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