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YOU, The Never Forgotten Gift To Me

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kat
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0 posted 05-31-2003 09:27 AM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kat


Say you will cherish us until the end of time
What we had still lives in our hearts
Say you will surrender to our dream
Letís break the chains that keep us apart

I keep moving up the corporate steps
A perfect image I choose to play
Leaving my heart, pushing back feelings
My titles change along the way

Telling myself my vision has altered
When my heart persists to crack
Tender moments kept in check
Precious memories piercing back

To strive and achieve the impossible
My confidence, your loveís gift to me
I would give it away in an instant
If only in this lifetime we were meant to be


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ethome
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1 posted 05-31-2003 09:29 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Very nice...I like the twists and turns the thought pattern goes through in this piece.
Nice yearning conclusion.
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2 posted 05-31-2003 11:42 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

seems to me that soul is going to travel slongside your heart for a very long time, no matter how many ladders you climb..
or even if you should fall from one
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I may have misconceived this since it's early in the morning still, but nonetheless it was enjoyable.

"Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain."

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good write...keeping love forever
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Like this...James
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(sigh) This is lovely and heartfelt, sweet friend, and no matter what happens may you be YOU and that special somneone recognize that too, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kat, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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I am sure he knows, and wants that too!
I know he is still, In Love with you!
Life is uncertain, of what to do.
Life doesn't change, feelings for you!
Dakota
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8 posted 11-09-2014 01:41 PM       View Profile for Dakota   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dakota

I am sure he knows, and wants that too!
I know he is still, In Love with you!
Life is uncertain, of what to do.
Life doesn't change, feelings for you!
 
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