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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
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0 posted 2003-05-31 01:43 AM



I am a child
with a shipping invoice

I stare at the silk
webbing my fingers
     and would rather live there
than the duplex built for me

I read

     take advantage of the book's spine

never known is the damage
      of bending a book
             too far

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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-05-31 01:45 AM


Some serious food for thought...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-05-31 02:31 AM


you know I know this one Bri . . .

I always treat my books like I have just bought them from the shelf for the first time . . .
xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-05-31 02:48 AM


damn...an awesome write
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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4 posted 2003-05-31 12:27 PM


hey you...

you've done gone and sparked a thought in this weary head. (and "they" said it couldn't be done, HA!)

this one goes so deep, that methinks you are just beginning to skim the top?

Hugging you.

( I hate my life.)

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2003-05-31 10:31 PM


Sometimes I'd like to read your mind while you write. This intrigues me. The title seems to have little to do with the poem and yet. I wish there was a way to talk about 'inpsiration' of our work.
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