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Simply Infatuation |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Pure was the love affair Simple was the look One look was all it took For me So young So fair To fall In the deepest of deeps Love's passion burned In Love's keep All I knew was his scent His smile His omnipresent glow The very sun shadowed in comparison Soon Love took on the form of another His touch His embrace His tenderest of caresses He was It was Love will forver remain Simply infatuation yv |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay! Oh YV, this is a beautiful debut, dearest friend, and may your heart always be infatuated with sincere, trusting love, God Bless You, this is a golden gem! Welcome to Passions, sweet YV, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by all your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yv, this was a very nice first post  The very sun shadowed in comparison I know this feeling  M |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful first post, lovely expression of emotion. I will look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to passions Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In Love's keep All I knew was his scent His smile His omnipresent glow The very sun shadowed in comparison ================================= well thats one emotive verse and very cool analogy... I wish I had wrote that last line above. Welcome to poetry land..so nice to have you here with us. Im still imagining your voice ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Love your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome... Excellent first write... Only a peak at the talent...looking forward to the unabridged. TD |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
welcome and a terrifect write,, It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions !! Enjoyed your first post. Have fun here! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good first post. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions In Poetry.  Hugs to you, Ethel....garysgirl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice first post! Welcome to Passions! |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
capturing infatuation in perfect perspective. This poem is like wine and cheese. |
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A2J Junior Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 43South Africa |
enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Yv. You have a talent that I hope you will choose to share with us often. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome, this is a very nice entrance... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Welcome to Passions! I loved your first post...And I am sure you will love it here. I have been here a little less than two months and am growing by leaps and bounds thanks to the wonderful poets here. I have never felt so welcomed and my words so accepted. Looking forward to more of your words. Patricia |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, the scent of love does linger. WELCOME! you'll find this site a friendly, nicely scented shelter. ENJOY!  |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Welcome to Passions.Infatuation is like love lite.Looking forward to more of your posts. paladin |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
Infatuation can be as sweet as honeysuckle or sour as a temptingly forbiden pack of sour patch kids... I know the feeling. great poem Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to Passions Good write A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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