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whiskey
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0 posted 2003-05-30 08:43 PM



"Love Is"

Love is
The sky
So clear and Bright
So blue
Such a delight

Love is
The stars
Shinning high
Sparkling up
Oh so bright

Love is
The moon
So bold and white
Gleaming light
Down tonight

Love is
The trees
Swaying gentle in the breeze
And in winter time
Loosing their leaves

Love is
The flowers
With petals so bright
Opening morn
Closing at night

Love is
The rain
Falling down
The sound of the drops
Hitting the ground

Love is
The sun
Showing the day
Giving us light
Then fading away

Love is
The birds
Flying so high
Putting on a show
For you and I

Love is
In what we see
Love can be different
From you and to me

Love is
Everything
Thats dear to you hold
Whatever it is
Never let it go


"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

[This message has been edited by whiskey (05-30-2003 08:44 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-05-30 08:46 PM


yes there are so many sounds and touches  and sights that bring love to us.

I love the one of the rain ...especially since we have had so much lately.
~smiles
M

yv
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2 posted 2003-05-30 08:47 PM


Masterful and true.  Thank you for the insight on true love.  When the youth of my generation see love as an adventure, your poem speaks to me and shows me love as an emotion, a feeling, life in and of itself.  Simply put, I loved it.  Hope to see more from you in the future.

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yv

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3 posted 2003-05-30 09:10 PM




(smiles) And I'm sure we all see love slightly different from one another but everything you said I agree with! (kiss on cheek) And may the bluebird of happiness always warble with love in your hearts birdhouse, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

JilGirl
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4 posted 2003-05-30 09:19 PM


Yes, love is something to everyone and everything to someone! Nicely expressed!
(I like your SIG!)

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-05-30 09:22 PM


wow  thats a lota love!! very good write!!

It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity.

Patricia
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6 posted 2003-05-31 12:08 PM


Yes! I believe love encompasses all that is good.

Very beautiful...

Patricia

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7 posted 2003-05-31 03:54 AM


good stuff
Margherita
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8 posted 2003-05-31 10:28 AM


You are love-filled and share beautifully ..... I can imagine you singing this poem to your child.
Much love, Margherita

ethome
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9 posted 2003-05-31 10:31 AM


Beautiful metaphorical parallels....very nice indeed!

The best teachers have the biggest ears

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-05-31 11:15 AM


Julie, this is so beautiful. Yes, Love is all this.

I loved the whole poem, but these ending
verses were my favorite....

Love is
In what we see
Love can be different
From you and to me

Love is
Everything
Thats dear to you hold
Whatever it is
Never let it go


Thanks for this, sweet Lady  
Hugs to you  
Ethel


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