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babygurl55
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since 2003-05-28
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0 posted 2003-05-30 03:48 PM


I wrote this today at school because today was th elast day for the seniors. i worte this to a friend that was very close to me. i wrote this comment so you know why and how important it is to me.


~Graduation~

You are going away now
Your off on your own
Going out in the real world
You act like your scared
It's something new to you
I know you can make it
Be as strong as you can be
As you walk ou the door
Tears are crawling down my face
Like drops of rain falling from the sky.

There's a whole new world out there
So bright, big and new
New people, and new things to discover
It'll be like a whole new world to you.

Graduation is a big deal
No one liks to leave
But as you grow up
You need to learn to say good-bye
As the tears run down you face
The same will happen to me
I just want you to know I lov you
And never forget me!


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-05-30 03:50 PM


very nice rememberence i'm sure they will cherish.

It's the quality of the complement that i feel not the quanity.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-05-31 01:35 PM


the hard truth, the soft heart...sad write
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