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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-05-30 02:17 PM


female needs love
and
male wants love.

female needs trust
and
male wants lust.

female wants discuss
and
male gets disgusted.

female becomes jilted
and
male becomes wilted.

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-05-30 02:27 PM


This is very thruthful. I really liked this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-05-30 04:05 PM


Glenn, this is true with some, maybe,
but not all...like mine.  

Avery thoughtful write, friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-05-30 04:28 PM


This is a cute little wiggle of poem!
You know, I understood so well the message, and the humor, and the depth this poet went to, in order to deliver it so well.
Appreciate the quality of this write. TD

ethome
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4 posted 2003-05-30 04:43 PM


Well, there's some real absolutes in this piece to a certain degree.....It is something both sexes can relate to.
I enjoyed the read

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Magnus
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5 posted 2003-05-30 04:47 PM


Glenn...you gave all of our weaknesses
away!!  Cute write,  enjoyed it.

Jamie
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6 posted 2003-05-30 04:49 PM


An interesting juxtaposition

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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aran
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7 posted 2003-05-30 05:08 PM


An interesting write, no doubt.

It's just long enough to provide the full and intended effect, yet it is not too long where the overall punch is weekened.

Well done.

majnu
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8 posted 2003-05-30 06:18 PM


hard words old chap. good, but hard.

-majnu
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JilGirl
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9 posted 2003-05-30 07:13 PM


An average stated here. Thank Goodness there are still above average men and women! Those who recognise their average frailty, learn to rise above it and seek to please the "other." In the search, they even become pleased with themselves! A keen observation, QjQ!

Blessings!
Shirl

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passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-05-30 07:19 PM



Kethry
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11 posted 2003-05-30 07:20 PM


A true write... but not absolute truth.Good poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



scorpio
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12 posted 2003-05-30 07:47 PM


Much enjoyed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

WhiteRose
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13 posted 2003-05-30 08:47 PM


Kind of says it all in a nutshell doesn't it.
Patricia
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14 posted 2003-05-31 12:15 PM


Ahhh...The Venus-Mars Wars.  
Great truth be found in your verse...
In my experience of the universe.

Good write, Q!

Patricia


Rick
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15 posted 2003-05-31 08:34 PM


QjQ, always good to read someone elses opinion of life and love, of man and woman, enjoyed.

Sincerely
Rick

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