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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-05-30 11:01 AM



Key

A soft kiss
is but a key
to unlock a door
that opens a heart
to a love
that is deeply
devoted to lasting
...forever

believe in what your heart feels...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-05-30 11:08 AM




keys, treasured soulmates
slender silkings holding love
necks beribboned so

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-30-2003 11:09 AM).]

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-05-30 01:05 PM


Dear Scorpio, these are some of the most beautiful words
I have read in a long long while.
Not one word is wasted..each filled with so much love.
Your lady is very very fortunate indeed
to be on the receiving end of your kiss.

To love and be loved
for this gift eternal thanks
to Heaven above.

~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy Lee~


~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~


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3 posted 2003-05-30 01:12 PM


scorpio - what a beautiful piece you have written! Love it I do. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-30 01:26 PM



ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-05-30 02:04 PM


Wonderful! TD
the_loner_23
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6 posted 2003-05-30 02:05 PM


This is beautiful and true

Cold hands means a warm heart

QjQ
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7 posted 2003-05-30 02:12 PM


fabulous!!!

gMt

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8 posted 2003-05-30 06:44 PM


*sigh* this is really beautiful
scorpio
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9 posted 2003-05-30 07:35 PM


Karilea...love your reply...thank you..

Nancy, thank you for the kind words of support...you humble me with your kindness...I do hope my lady enjoys the kisses..

Glad you liked this, Chris...thank you..

passing shadows...I appreciate your stopping in to read..

ThisDiamond...thank you for your comments..

Julie...it is true...and thanks..

QjQ...it was nice of you to read and comment...thank you..

Sea, I do thank you for your support..

believe in what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-05-30 09:15 PM




(smiles) It truly is, and the simple gift unlocks the diary of the soul where one can almost read exactly what a loves heart is saying! (kiss on cheek) I guess you can call that "eavesdropping on heaven", God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-05-30 10:00 PM



Scorpio~Such beautiful words deserve another read.

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2003-05-30 10:53 PM


Beautiful~
M

icebox
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13 posted 2003-05-30 10:56 PM


Quite a lot of feeling to put in such a tiny space.

Well done.

scorpio
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14 posted 2003-05-31 09:15 AM


So very true Noah...thank you my friend..

Ah Enchantress...that was sweet of you...

Most kind of you, Nakdthoughts..

Thank you Icebox...

believe in what your heart feels...

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