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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2003-05-30 08:36 AM



Temptress (ADV 5/30/03)

She moves around me
Circling like a vulture
Waiting for the right moment
To swoop down

She moves in me
Warming my blood and body
With her hot breath
Of wanton power
And shameless desire

She moves through me
Possessing my mind
Controlling my actions
Easing into me with graceful abandonment

She is the part of me
That you have awakened
A sleeping Madonna
Waiting for your kiss
She is the temptress
Of my strength and desire


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-05-30 08:40 AM


Susan,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-05-30 01:22 PM


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the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-05-30 01:48 PM


All I can say is "I am speechless".

Cold hands means a warm heart

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-05-30 02:32 PM


I can't begin to explain how brilliant this is.
Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-06-02 10:33 AM


She is the part of me
That you have awakened
A sleeping Madonna
Waiting for your kiss
She is the temptress
Of my strength and desire

perhaps you should get better aquainted with her... and him...


yv
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6 posted 2003-06-02 10:47 AM


Absolutely stunning.  I loved the image and the metaphore of the vulture waiting to swoop down.  Thank you for sharing these emotions.  I hope to read more of your lovely artwork.

New Member,
yv

Brad Majors
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7 posted 2003-06-02 02:11 PM


^bump^
joelle
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8 posted 2003-06-02 04:03 PM


This is the first of your's that I have a chance to read, and WOW!  
Looking forward to reading more!

Joelle

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9 posted 2003-06-02 04:13 PM


Wonderful...much enjoyed!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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