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Open Poetry #26

Weary wings (more haiku)

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2003-06-02 10:37 PM

sorry for stealing your heron idea Kacy.

When shadows fall long,
Weary wings hastily part
From their daily toil

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-02 10:44 PM

This was so beautiful. I could actually picture it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

2 posted 2003-06-02 11:14 PM

loner- thanks for the read. i'm glad you enjoyed.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-06-02 11:17 PM

perfect picture to go with your words.....

very nice

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-06-03 01:18 AM

Hehe, glad to have helped with the inspiration, Edder.
This is cool, and I love that picture!
And thanks for the thanks.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-03 02:41 AM

awesome, beautiful!

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2003-06-03 03:42 PM

You always know how to make such few words so powerful

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

apoetdreams
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 52
NJ, USA

7 posted 2003-06-03 03:43 PM

Great picture and poem match again. Perfect.

Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-06-03 04:35 PM

What a lovely post!

Warm hugs
EA

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