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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-05-29 08:14 PM



Awaiting Act II

I close my eyes
and can still see you
standing there before me.

I call your name throughout the night
waiting for your return,
knowing that I change like the wind.

You have stolen my smile
and I wish for it to be brought back
and replaced, when your lips touch mine.

I could hold you hostage
in my dreams, run you through my mind
until the blending complements each.

You are never out of my sight,
for the stage is set,
the players cast, and I am
awaiting Act II.

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-29-2003 08:14 PM).]

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ben_pelling
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since 2003-02-28
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1 posted 2003-05-29 08:23 PM


Nice one.

For I am the Death, the Horror and the Misery.... Amen.

carol
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2 posted 2003-05-29 09:18 PM


nakdthoughts,very nice poetry enjoyed the read

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3 posted 2003-05-29 09:42 PM


Maybe it's a one-act play....with a lot of encores!
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-30 04:08 AM



nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-05-30 04:38 PM


Thank you all..I am beginning to wonder if there was ever an Act I to begin with.

~sighing
M

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