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A Rose's Blush
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A Rose's Blush |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Above me, the ceiling’s texture, countless bumps reminding me of those roads traveled over goose flesh with a giggle.. Beside me, flower upon flower, swaying in my mind’s eye, of a meadow’s frolic. Beneath me, the warmth of a sun’s rays, the softness of cotton clouds, the image of sheer and silkiness in skin clothed...wanting... yearning... Around me, the fragrance of shoulders white as passion rose within the throes of lovers dancing. You were there among those clouds, dancing on the meadow, lying sensually upon a silken bed. I still feel your presence within the rumpled sheer. The musk of you filling my senses. Come again my love, that the moon might smile and blush the rose. As nails trace and lace rustles the warmth of you... I wait.... |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
absolutely beathtaking and beautiful. wow !!!! i think this is fantastic. hugs from june x |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
 One sigh just wouldn't be enough for this one Barry. It's lovely romantic verse that takes the breath away... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this is absolutely beautiful.... all of it, but this ending is breath-taking..... Come again my love, that the moon might smile and blush the rose. As nails trace and lace rustles the warmth of you... I wait.... So, so pretty.... Hugs,  Ethel |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
Nice one mate. This write made me want to read more. keep up the good work. Hugs, Ben.  |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Magnus,so very nice great work Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is beautiful such as lovely piece, I like it alot. Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh my...calling the fire department... the ceiling fan was pure genious! TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I'll be right there Barry!!  |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Simply magnificent!!!! Your seductive imagery seducing our senses. Perfect poetics in this piece. ***Ivy Rose |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is stunning, so beautiful in it's imagery and sentiment. Everytime I read you I find a new favourite. This is a keeper~ Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Barry, this one is really great! So well written, and put together. Really very sensuous, in a most tender way. You did a wonderful job, as always! Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...whew... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ This is so creatively sensual~ 'the ceiling’s texture, countless bumps reminding me of those roads traveled over goose flesh with a giggle.. *smiling* ... left me with a goosie-bump or two~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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