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ladypisces76
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since 2003-05-16
Posts 10
Maine,USA

0 posted 2003-05-29 04:50 PM



I need to tell you that it has to end
I don't think I can go back to being your friend.
We went to far we went to fast
I always thought in the end it would last.
But I can see my loves not returned
it was all in my fantasy for you I have learned.
Don't feel bad that you don't love me
what's meant to be was meant to be.
You have a home and a might as well be called a wife
just promise me you will have a happy life.

© Copyright 2003 Terri - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-05-29 04:56 PM


yes love must be received as well as given,

nice write telling it like it is,

gMt

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-05-29 04:59 PM


This poem is so true. i know from experience. I loved this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2003-05-29 04:59 PM


I'd say you're right on with this write...enjoyable.
JilGirl
Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
4 posted 2003-05-29 06:01 PM


Often saying goodbye takes exceptional strength. You've shown great strength here!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

carol
Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
5 posted 2003-05-29 09:25 PM


very nice write and well said

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-05-30 04:12 AM


yeah, I know this well
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