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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-05-28 10:45 PM


This is from a man's point of view.

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You think night and day
Why do you love me
When I make a lot of mistakes

She just said
Because one day
I will make mistakes
Just like you

Then I say to her
But I make the same ones
Over and over again
Yet you forgive me just the same

She says to him
No one is perfect
I even make the same mistakes
Once and again

Then I say to her
You need a better
Man than me
I hurt you once to many
Just throw me away

She says to him
You may not be perfect
But I do not care
I am not going to throw you away
Because I care

Then I say to her
That is
Why I love you
You forgive
And one day
You will forget
My past mistakes


Cold hands means a warm heart

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-05-28 10:49 PM


now this is a true write of "being in love"

gMt

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
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2 posted 2003-05-28 11:19 PM


I agree. Only an angel could write something like this.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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3 posted 2003-05-28 11:29 PM


Julie, it is very good to see you back her.
This is a very good poem.  
Hugs  
Ethel

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-29 02:57 AM


cool!
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