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Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
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Ancient land called Chivalry

0 posted 2003-05-28 10:02 PM


Im losing my world
My world is me
I feel so cold
I wish to feel free

My life is you
And you my life
If I could have anything
It would be you as my wife

I wish you could say
With nothing but pride
I love you to death
And Ive got nothing to hide

Your doing to me
The same as before
To a person from the past
Who loved you to the core

All Ive asked
Is for the simplest things
And pain and agony
Is all that brings

Ive promised to stay
With you to the end
But over the edge
Me you will send

Ive done my part
and tried to hard
Ive shared my heart
And been your guard

The little things matter
More than the big
And these cause me
To snap like a twig

I talk to you
Because your all Ive got
And you talk to him
Which bugs me alot

I know your wish
And im trying so hard
My hearts broken on a dish
Served with a pigs lard

I really dont understand
Why you let him push you around
I wanna rip his arms off
And that, you think is profound

He hurt me alot
This Im sure you know
Yet you set it aside
And try to let us grow

Never again do I want to hear
That youve got things bad
Ive told you how I feel
And Im sure now your mad

But after all Ive dealt with
Im going to push it aside
Treat it like a myth
And still Ive got nothing to hide

© Copyright 2003 Krystopher Morris - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-29 01:01 AM


Oh this is pain and heartache poured from within the deepest well of you.
"I am sorry" somehow doesn't quite cut it. But I am, Krystopher.
Wishing peaceful dreams, friend.

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
2 posted 2003-05-29 01:14 AM


My heart feels this pain! May your pain be replaced by knowing WHO you are and by knowing WHO caused this pain.

Life has MORE to offer! Seek it! Enjoy it!
devour it!

A well expressed write!

Blessings!
Shirl


Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (05-29-2003 01:16 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-05-29 02:33 AM


very sad hurt here
Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry
4 posted 2003-05-30 07:21 PM


Thanks Everyone!

"Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron

Shawna Fitzgerald
Junior Member
since 2003-10-09
Posts 11

5 posted 2003-10-12 02:58 PM


good one krys
    
       love,
         shawna

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