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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-05-28 06:49 PM


Interior wells perched
Against ivory
Tremble
Closing throat
To breathless
Thrills

Shiver that begins
In silent
Brought throughout
A surfaced
Exclamation
!

Points to make
On promises
Of sovereign glow
A rose
Anointed

Oils bead
In perfumed
Conjugation
Pink
To surface
Blushed

Copyright Kkh 5/28/03



[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-28-2003 06:53 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-05-28 07:11 PM


nice writing,

gMt

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

2 posted 2003-05-28 07:38 PM




Wow, now I'm blushing!!!

My, was that a nice write!
Richy



serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-05-28 07:45 PM


Love that you took your time with this...so slow, the sensuality is apparent.

Enjoyed.

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
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4 posted 2003-05-28 08:46 PM


**sighing here**
I love your work.
What are you doing so far down here?

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Magnus
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5 posted 2003-05-28 09:28 PM


See,  you do know how to blush!  And you
told me that you didn't....just teasin',
like this one K.  nice.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2003-05-28 09:48 PM


Being "mooned" as VAS put it, does that to one....

Just kidding...I cascaded down the words just like SB did...wonderful piece...

jwesley

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-30 04:40 AM


how descriptive! liked this!
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