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Ghazal...ing
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Ghazal...ing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Ghazal...ing I wake to thoughts of you and shadow's light. Morning flecks of memory dance in the light. I wonder if and when the push will fight. The inner me will rise before day's light. I step on words whose meanings color bright. My pictured past of you that lifts me light. I watch how you have changed my world of white. The reddish tint of blush on my skin, light. I take the hints behind, and hold them tight. In mind of need, that presses, irons light. The wrinkles of a life in hurtful spite. Becoming one in touch of tender, light. I brush away the "must of old" in write. And dwell upon the you in morning light. M **Not sure if I did this right ..been a long time.** "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
you did it very well Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
not a clue whether it was done right or not..lol..but the read..the read is very nice.... danged free verse people anyway...never could learnt o rhyme or use form..all we know is what sounds to us like it should..and this sounds to me like it should. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank You PG... I had to go to Biki's site just to hope I was on the right track. Hey Ron, You do rhyme pretty good...or is that well? I like free verse but I do whatever it is my mind and fingers tell me to do and it is raining so hard today...I thought a little Ghazaling would match the boringness of this May  thanks M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..rainy days can be a bore at times... today..we have sunshine and a few clouds. showers through this morning have ended and it should be beautiful afternoon. Now... since I am stuck in the office..it might as well be raining here for all the enjoyment I'll ge out of the weather..lol sounds like a good day to make tea and scones, curl up on the couch with a good book and just let the words carry you away. I so used to enjoy reading an old mystery novel on rainy days...do a bit of cooking... and just listen to the sounds of water dripping off the leaves and roof... hmmmm... reminds me of a time...but I'd have to save that one for mature.. LOL enjoy your day my friend... rain and all..it belongs to you.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey pretty soon we will need an ark...and where is Noah when you need him I am force-fitting today...my next poem out of boredom...this is definitely when you wish you had another to snuggle with under the covers. M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayprivate&number=59&topic=000128 A few thoughts on May... (chuckling) covers? who needs covers? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am checking you out...once again M |
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