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Edder
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0 posted 2003-05-27 09:47 PM



With pen in hand I ride again
upon my trusty steed.
Twenty horses 'neath his skin
and seven forward speeds.
I navigate and contemplate
life's greatest mysteries.
When notion stikes I stop and write
then turn for one more pass.
My muse it seems prefers turf green
and smell of fresh cut grass.



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1 posted 2003-05-27 09:51 PM


Yes! ...and if you really want to get her cookin', turn the compost.....that'll do it every time.....Never understood it either, but it works....

Glad you thought of telling it, and did it so well...

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Edder
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2 posted 2003-05-27 09:54 PM


thanks Ed. isn't it weird how "gettin out there" stirs her up!
KoKo
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3 posted 2003-05-27 10:33 PM


lol!! This is cute Eddleroo! I know how this goes...But it usually happens to me when I'm cleaning house and don't have the time to stop and write, damn it. lol ~hugs~ I'm glad you've found your muse sweets!!! ~huggles~ Luv ya!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
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BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-05-27 11:53 PM


Of all things!!!
Aren't you clever, Edder!

This says so much!  

Bless you for this, and your muse too!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-05-28 02:50 AM



Edder
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6 posted 2003-05-28 07:30 AM


Lauren- thanks so much hon and thanks for helping me find my muse. Luv ya more!

Blues- awww aren't you sweet! always a pleasure to see you reading me!

Dixie- your applause always makes me smile!

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