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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-05-27 08:23 PM


The Beginning
of Forever

I wish a woman would honestly
fall in love with me.
Just me, only me.

She could chase me with
passion and zeal from
Rome to Brazil.

We would spend hours and
hours of time and
energy together.

I would call this time in
my life the beginning
of forever.

JamesLee
May26
2003



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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-05-27 08:38 PM


With all of the romantic writing that you do and no lady present? Shaking my head and sighing here. Lovely write once again. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Balladeer
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2 posted 2003-05-28 12:11 PM


So many people have so much to give and no one to give it to...your wish is shared by many, James  
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-28 02:45 AM


dreams and wishes are okay, enough to hold until it happens, and it will happen
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-06-14 06:12 PM


Thank you nightshade, Balladeer and passing shadows for the nice responses...
Yes it will happen...again and again...James

Hockeychick19
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5 posted 2003-06-17 03:41 PM


This is absolutely beautiful and very romantic.  Nice work.

(((hugs)))
~Kelly~

topsyturveychick
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6 posted 2003-06-18 12:02 PM


I would call this time in
my life the beginning
of forever.

This bought tears to my eyes.  I think that its often the people that have so much to give to others that are the ones with out anyone to give it to...if that makes sense.  I've been in ur position way to many times...it hurts...but there is always that special someone that was made just for us.  It's just a matter of time.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

WindSong
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7 posted 2003-06-18 05:15 PM


Awesome job. I loved it. Peace. ~*~Kirah~*~

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

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