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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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Here we sit by the glowing embers the flames dancing in stride of the raindrops touching the window, so gentle your eyes touch my beamish heart and instantly I surrender my love to you. QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (05-27-2003 07:31 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is beautiful. I can feel the warmth of the fire..Very nicely written glenn.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly written, Glenn. A very nice and loving poem of devotion.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Glenn~ Very nice~ *huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is a beautiful piece, so romantic its wonderful  nicely expressedJulie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed the read |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Reads like a "Yummy" time! A terrific write! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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