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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-05-27 01:07 PM



An older piece of mine.

Dancing on a hip lady bug
underneath the starry skies
in the dreamy eyes of this
these short days of our lives
looking through my rose colored glasses
I see only what I want to see
and only feel what is good for me
I am but a ship
lost in the seas of ambiquity
heading toward my open grave
as careless as the court fool
giving roses to dead
long forgotton souls
falling to sleep each night
in shallow unmarked graves
I only see what I want to see
while other may fall around me
reality is sharper
then I want to know
I am content in my trip
dancing on a hip lady bug
in the dreamy eyes of this
these short days of our lives.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-05-27 01:22 PM


reality is sharper
then I want to know

amen ..grins

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2 posted 2003-05-27 02:26 PM


good write and thoughts

QjQ

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3 posted 2003-05-27 02:40 PM


Reflective piece here Brad.
Well done. TD

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4 posted 2003-05-27 04:25 PM


"lost in the seas of ambiquity"


This is so great, excellently done

Kidd

Brad Majors
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thank you
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6 posted 2003-05-27 06:53 PM


Sometimes we just need the rose colored glasses otherwise who could survive?!
Beautiful poem, Brad.
Love, Margherita

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7 posted 2003-05-28 03:25 AM


awesome
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8 posted 2003-05-28 04:05 PM


I think I wear them constantly Brad, and dare anyone to remove them sometimes.  Excellent work as usual.
Brad Majors
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9 posted 2003-05-28 04:11 PM


thank you
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10 posted 2003-05-28 04:56 PM


Thos rose coloured glasses are fantastic and so is your poem Brad.

enjoyed

Maree

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