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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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0 posted 2003-05-27 06:07 AM



There were no shadows in this silence
cut by the cloud
and the lack of words
growing from your window


Imagine me screaming in your dream
inside the head that banishes reciprocation


Pleading flesh spilled
its brand much thicker
full of nothing new

Living with the barriers
packed and parcel to the ordinary
shaking by the veins of weary leaf


Together hope sometimes plaits a ladder
with every toughened glass soul
whilst reality seizes its weapon to puncture.

Raph, unfortunately, i know how you feel.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (05-27-2003 06:09 AM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-05-27 11:44 AM


Together hope sometimes plaits a ladder
with every toughened glass soul
whilst reality seizes its weapon to puncture.

Raph, unfortunately, i know how you feel.


Gemma, there is so much care and compassion put forth in those few words for our friend Raph. Sometimes I think that God lets us go through certain situations so that we will have more compassion for others. Don't you.

BTW, it sure was good to see your name on here. Are you out of school for the summer, and is your computer fixed. I hope so. I miss you, Lady. Oh, did you get my e-mail that I sent to you?

Well, I need to go so that I can get a letter in to the mail for Gary. Yep, we're still in this long-distance thing. I'll be so glad when we can be with each other every day.

Bye for now...
Heart hugs,  
Ethel

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-05-27 11:47 AM


Smiling at this lovely tender post for Raph. and it's well done, gemma!
good to see you here

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-05-27 11:55 AM


Sorry that you do gem but thanks for the write
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