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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-05-26 08:52 PM


Faith,Hope
veins  desensitized
tied off and tapped into
one too many times
to feel anything more
than the pain
of puncture

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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VA
1 posted 2003-05-26 08:53 PM


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

ecrivan
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my own state
2 posted 2003-05-26 10:17 PM


You had to be around when the first polio shots were around...the needles were very big
then...how I remembered that and the doctor then that used to give me a lolly..Dr. Shapiro..good topic


serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-05-26 10:23 PM


hmmm...and you were wanting to talk to ME?





I think we're both okay, m'self. We're just TOO sensitive!

Hugs you.

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-05-26 10:49 PM


Raph:

too sensitive -
yes - sometimes a curse . . .
but this . . .
is amazing writing - truly
being a phlebotomist . . .
seriously those wounds take time
they do . . .
Goodness if they were visible . . .
xxoo  

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-05-26 11:33 PM


thanks all just feeling..well hopeless..yeah yeah i know like that's anything new..oh well I'm off to bed thanks again all
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Gaia
6 posted 2003-05-27 12:36 PM


ouch! maybe stay away from the vampires for a few days? LOL. Hugs to you.
BTW, Raph...
what IS your blood type?

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-27 02:51 AM


Raph
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Georgia
8 posted 2003-05-27 11:54 AM


Sometimes the disapointment from misplaced hope and faith can feel sharper then any injury
Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-05-27 11:59 AM


Thanks again everyone
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