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Edder
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0 posted 2003-05-26 06:32 PM


My apologies to Frost.....


A mountain lies ahead of me
with boulders strewn from jagged peaks
along a path I must now take
if I'm to find serenity.
I stumble on each hour I wake;
cannot falter, pause or stray.
To mount this summit is my test,
so on I push despite the ache.
And when I reach the final crest
I bow to knee and catch my breath.
Then humbly pray to Lord above
with thankful heart for journey blest.
He guided me on winding path
And spared me from the mountain's wrath.
And spared me from the mountain's wrath.

© Copyright 2003 Edder - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-26 07:35 PM


WELL DONE! Frost would be smiling, no doubt.
And mountains to climb before....

Startime55
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2 posted 2003-05-26 07:37 PM


BRAVO!!!! Though we have mountains to climb it is so good to know He is there waiting at the top....I LOVE THIS POEM!!!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-05-26 07:58 PM


Inspiring write! Having climbed a few mountains myself, I'd say you have written a beautiful poem about the journey to God's country on mountain peak! It's worth the trek and staying your course in life. The path least traveled is the most difficult--and can also be the most rewarding!

Warm hugs,
EA

Edder
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4 posted 2003-05-26 10:16 PM


Kacy- thanks so much. i'm glad you enjoyed it.

Startime- thank you. i am truly flattered.

EarthAngel- thank you for the read. i'm honored that you found this inspiring!

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-05-27 03:50 AM


awesome piece!
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
6 posted 2003-05-27 10:04 PM


!!!!!!!! Eddles!!!!!! ooooh I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! Congrats hun you've really gotten your muse back on track!!!!!!! ~hugs~ This is awesome!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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