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junemac
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0 posted 2003-05-26 03:58 PM


A smudge of lipstick
One missing hour
Like curdled milk
Our love turned sour

No questions asked
I couldnt bear
The guilt in your eyes
Already there

Her aroma followed you
through our door
A scent that sickened me
to the core

In that very moment
My heart was stilled
With unspoken lies
Our love you killed

Of a lipstick smudge
You were never aware
But for me its stain
Will forever be there

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-05-26 04:03 PM


June~
Oh my ... this is really, really GOOD !
And the 'oldie' in me is singing "Lipstick On Your Collar"~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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junemac
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2 posted 2003-05-26 04:14 PM


thanks marge. I know that song too ( lol although i am a little young to actually remember it ! )

hugs and thanks for always being there marge.


love from  june x

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-05-26 08:44 PM


Sad,  when the aroma that lingers is not your own!   Take care junemac~


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4 posted 2003-05-27 03:42 AM


very sad...I can relate well
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