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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-05-26 01:54 PM


Our strides are in rhythm
as we glide along.
Blooms of petals open to
make room.
You are the bride, I am the
groom.
All in the room gasp and view the
awesome love I share with you.


* just dreaming or is it a nitemare.


[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-26-2003 02:40 PM).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2003-05-26 02:36 PM


Touching, slightly frightening poem you've written here Q.
Joe Houck
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2 posted 2003-05-26 03:29 PM


for many it turns into a nightmare.  But hey, you only live once, and you can get married as many times as you want. =)
Joe

JilGirl
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3 posted 2003-05-26 05:52 PM


'Sounds like a dreamy nitemare, to me!
Only YOU can make it a dream! Good romantic  write!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

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4 posted 2003-05-26 09:08 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Glenn, this is so very beautiful despite the heartwrenching ending, sweet friend, I know just how you feel! (sad sigh) I am only 19, and yes, I know I shouldn't rush anything, but I do very much want to fall in love with a special girl, and I dream of her and a first kiss all the time! (sad sigh) My dreams are ever so real and fantastic, then waking up is a heartbreak realizing I have no girl yet! (big hugggssssssss) I send friendship hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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5 posted 2003-05-27 03:36 AM


hhehe...good one
El_Campeador
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6 posted 2003-05-27 08:35 AM


I hope it will be the best dream you have ever had...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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7 posted 2003-05-27 09:10 AM


QjQ paints a miniature....and in exquisite detail...very nice!

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