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Richy
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0 posted 05-25-2003 11:54 PM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richy



I wish that I could fine the wurds
to rite you a nise poam
Iíd wrap it in a purdy cloth
and write down who itís froam

I wish I knew sum fancy wurds
that made some kinda cents
Iíd rite them real nice like
and Iíd tack Ďem on a fence

I wish I had but half a brain
soís I could make some rhymes
I wish theyíd smell like sweet parfume,
instead of rotten limes

I wish that I could show you how
the rain falls offa duck
I wish that we could fool arouní
in back of Billyís truck!

I wish that I could catch for yoo
a nice green speckled trout
Iíd cleen out all the guts real nice
cause thatís what Iím about

I wish that I could play a tune
on Lesterís new banjoe
Iíd sing a real purdy song
and weíd give it a go!

I wish that I could take yoo to
an outdoor country danss
You know how much Iíd be obliged
to start us sum romance

I wish the moon was full one nite
so I could tell yoo this
That I am rather smitten soís
a how abouta kiss?

I wish the wind began to blowe
so you got really cold
Iíd let you wear my buckskin hat
although its kinda old

I wish an alligator would
jump out from this heer swamp
Iíd rassle him and make some shoes
so you could reelly stomp!

I wish an old coyote would
begin to howl away
Iíd chaseíem with a big ole stick
then weíd be on our way

I wish that you would marry me
and bee my newly bride
I swear that Iíll be true to yoo
I  hardlys ever lied

Ií wish that I could offer you
a shack with indoor plumbiní
But if we play our cards right
all themís luxsuries forthcominí

All I know is that I hope
that all your dreems come troo
All I know is that my heart
belongs to only yoo!


© Copyright 2003 Richy - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 05-26-2003 12:03 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Write nice honky tonkin'~
It's enough to ruffle any gals petticoats~

What a swell kinda guy, if ah do say so myself!!

Richy~  
Richy
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2 posted 05-26-2003 01:28 AM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richy




Well ainít you the darned cutest little thang!

Why thank ya kindly... MissyBlue

Hey... and I more then wreckin, your pretty swell too, Bluesy Gal!

lol


Richy

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3 posted 05-26-2003 01:51 AM       View Profile for majnu   Email majnu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for majnu

love the tongue in cheekness of this - a nice refreshing write.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
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4 posted 05-26-2003 02:20 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

that's cute Richy, very neat write
Richy
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5 posted 05-26-2003 02:46 AM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richy



Tung inn cheeke?

Wut evver doe yu meen???
Richy
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6 posted 05-26-2003 02:50 AM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richy




Thansk Passeeng Shadeows...

Iím glade yoo theenk i rite neet!

Richy
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7 posted 05-26-2003 06:24 AM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richy


Sareey manju...

ďPlop!Ē

Ahhh thatís better!

sumptin wuz stuc in my cheak...

Ohhh... it wuz, my tung?


Thankx majnu!


Im glade yuu  lyked itt


Riichee

Patricia
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8 posted 05-26-2003 09:26 AM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Hay Unkle Jed,

I can only reply with some lines from that famous song of our childhood, as I believe we are about the same age. I am sure you know it:

"Come and listen to my story about a man named Jed, a poor montaineer barely kept his family fed.  Then one day he was shootin' at some food and up from the ground came a bubblin' crude...Oil, that is, black coal, texas tea..."

Very cute, Richie. Are you making fun of me as the Freshman here?  LOL

Y'all come back now ya here,
Patsy Jo
Earth Angel
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9 posted 05-26-2003 09:33 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Youse one fine sweet man! Who needs fancy words when sweet ones come straight from the heart of someone like you!

This was precious! You are so full of heart!
--and very romantic...  

Lovin' hugs,
Linda
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10 posted 05-26-2003 07:25 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Your humor is a blessing....Mannnn,  I can't
stop laughin'....  it's tooo much!!
Startime55
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11 posted 05-26-2003 07:28 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

I love it...I love it...*giggling* you sing these words very well...A total joy to read...
Balladeer
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12 posted 05-26-2003 10:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

U fractoored my ole funnyboan
With whatchu skribbled hear.
How culd a gal with any cents
Ignore wurds so sinsere?

I got a gal at Cripple Creek
I'd liketa plow hur field.
Culd I use this fine pome of yurs
so that hur hart will yield?

She's got to eyes so sparklie blu
My hart just can't resist hur.
With yur sweat wurds I'll win her hart
If not, I'll tri hur sister!!!
Richy
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13 posted 05-26-2003 11:51 PM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richy




Balladeer,


Iím sorryz Ďbout yer funnee boan
I hopes it deednít smart
You mite go trie sum Elmerís
so it dudnít falls aparrt

I gott a gal down Sweetwater wayy
whooz field coulld use some seed
At leass thatís wut she tol me
sumptin Ďbout a reel need!

I gess that yuu coold use my werds
since you are in a krunch
Jus donít go offa a hollerín if
her petticoats git all bunched!


Toerag
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Ala bam a


14 posted 06-23-2010 10:51 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Now this I can relate to.
 
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