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a luv poam |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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I wish that I could fine the wurds to rite you a nise poam I’d wrap it in a purdy cloth and write down who it’s froam I wish I knew sum fancy wurds that made some kinda cents I’d rite them real nice like and I’d tack ‘em on a fence I wish I had but half a brain so’s I could make some rhymes I wish they’d smell like sweet parfume, instead of rotten limes I wish that I could show you how the rain falls offa duck I wish that we could fool aroun’ in back of Billy’s truck! I wish that I could catch for yoo a nice green speckled trout I’d cleen out all the guts real nice cause that’s what I’m about I wish that I could play a tune on Lester’s new banjoe I’d sing a real purdy song and we’d give it a go! I wish that I could take yoo to an outdoor country danss You know how much I’d be obliged to start us sum romance I wish the moon was full one nite so I could tell yoo this That I am rather smitten so’s a how abouta kiss? I wish the wind began to blowe so you got really cold I’d let you wear my buckskin hat although its kinda old I wish an alligator would jump out from this heer swamp I’d rassle him and make some shoes so you could reelly stomp! I wish an old coyote would begin to howl away I’d chase’em with a big ole stick then we’d be on our way I wish that you would marry me and bee my newly bride I swear that I’ll be true to yoo I hardlys ever lied I’ wish that I could offer you a shack with indoor plumbin’ But if we play our cards right all them’s luxsuries forthcomin’ All I know is that I hope that all your dreems come troo All I know is that my heart belongs to only yoo! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Write nice honky tonkin'~ It's enough to ruffle any gals petticoats~ What a swell kinda guy, if ah do say so myself!! Richy~  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Well ain’t you the darned cutest little thang! Why thank ya kindly... MissyBlue Hey... and I more then wreckin, your pretty swell too, Bluesy Gal! lol Richy |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
love the tongue in cheekness of this - a nice refreshing write. -majnu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's cute Richy, very neat write |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Tung inn cheeke? Wut evver doe yu meen??? |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thansk Passeeng Shadeows... I’m glade yoo theenk i rite neet! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sareey manju... “Plop!” Ahhh that’s better! sumptin wuz stuc in my cheak... Ohhh... it wuz, my tung? Thankx majnu! Im glade yuu lyked itt Riichee |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Hay Unkle Jed, I can only reply with some lines from that famous song of our childhood, as I believe we are about the same age. I am sure you know it: "Come and listen to my story about a man named Jed, a poor montaineer barely kept his family fed. Then one day he was shootin' at some food and up from the ground came a bubblin' crude...Oil, that is, black coal, texas tea..." Very cute, Richie. Are you making fun of me as the Freshman here? LOL Y'all come back now ya here, Patsy Jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Youse one fine sweet man! Who needs fancy words when sweet ones come straight from the heart of someone like you! This was precious! You are so full of heart! --and very romantic...  Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your humor is a blessing....Mannnn, I can't stop laughin'.... it's tooo much!! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
 I love it...I love it...*giggling* you sing these words very well...A total joy to read... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
U fractoored my ole funnyboan With whatchu skribbled hear. How culd a gal with any cents Ignore wurds so sinsere? I got a gal at Cripple Creek I'd liketa plow hur field. Culd I use this fine pome of yurs so that hur hart will yield? She's got to eyes so sparklie blu My hart just can't resist hur. With yur sweat wurds I'll win her hart If not, I'll tri hur sister!!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Balladeer, I’m sorryz ‘bout yer funnee boan I hopes it deedn’t smart You mite go trie sum Elmer’s so it dudn’t falls aparrt I gott a gal down Sweetwater wayy whooz field coulld use some seed At leass that’s wut she tol me sumptin ‘bout a reel need! I gess that yuu coold use my werds since you are in a krunch Jus don’t go offa a holler’n if her petticoats git all bunched! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Now this I can relate to. |
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