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A Sage
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A Sage |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A Sage His wisdom is timeless young in loving thought Message never aimless words most painfully bought Travelled roads of hardship where lessons came with pain Words flowed from fingertip of bleeding heart and brain There’s magic in weaving of life’s love and passions Taught by him, believing leaving great impressions His soul comes from the past to one of modern times Writing of knight’s conquest love flowing in his rhymes A Sage, A Master of words taking his pen in hand Weaves visions for lovebirds in far off times and lands Dedicated to a man who inspired me with his talent and priceless friendship. He taught me that fantasy can become reality if we only keep believing. Thank you...Barry...there is no way I can ever express to you just how much I appreciate and love you for all you guidance and support. Without the friendship you give me I never would have found the love of my life. Startime [This message has been edited by Startime55 (05-25-2003 04:21 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 beautifulIf at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, kinda speechless here... Imagine that! I am very pleased for you and that special man in your life that will fulfill your dreams and heart's desires. I told ya you could, you can and you have... And you both have received a priceless gift from the other... Best to you both, to Erin and the girls... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! awesome write for an awesome man! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime...This is a wonderful tribute to a wonderful poet. I'm so glad that your heart has found love and that you had such a good friend in Barry. ***Ivy Rose |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Startime55, Oh terrific poem! I was mesmorized! "His soul comes from the past to one of modern times Writing of knight’s conquest love flowing in his rhymes" This part is my favorite. Oooh so good!!! Mike P.S.- And as for Barry, he sounds like a Saint! [This message has been edited by MikeFessel (05-26-2003 08:03 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh, this post made me feel so good! Sagacious Barry, would indeed make a good mentor! You are very fortunate!--and Passions is fortunate to have you both!  Loves 'n hugs to you both! Linda |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'There’s magic in weaving of life’s love and passions Taught by him, believing leaving great impressions' You've certainly captured the essence of quite a talented poet. Very cool ST and Barry! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Karen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, he is a gentle and wonderful friend indeed and I am sure his grace will continue to fulfill our hearts as he speaks with the integrity of an old soul with a youthful smile! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karen I thought of Barry as I read this even before I got to the end. I can relate so very well to your words for he has inspired me immensely and that is something I never will forget. I'm so glad you have found so much love and happiness to fill your life. Here is a quote I found which I thought you might like. "My friend is like a bark rounding a tree He warms like sun on a Winter day He cools like water in the hot noon His voice is ready as a Spring bird He is my friend And I am his" Your words have always amazed me and continue to do so. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very warm write about life,,, enjoyed.. Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen COOL! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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