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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-05-25 01:58 PM



It seems my words are always so few
when I express this love with a letter
in the words of a many shaded blue.

How often my thoughts of us, of you,
become the melody of a heart found singing
this love into the many shaded blue.

So many words to choose, none so new,
that say how very much I would like to
wrap you in the many shades of blue.

My thoughts so often drifting as they do
to every moment in my soul when you
were the song written with shades of blue.

So many sides displayed, so many that imbue
the total harp of lingering notes that swirl;
then rise blended into the many shaded blue.

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (05-25-2003 02:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-25 02:03 PM


Yes,  the taste,  the feel...the sight of
many shades..  Nicely said Ivy..

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2 posted 2003-05-25 02:05 PM


*sigh* lovely..enjoyed

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3 posted 2003-05-25 02:17 PM






(smiles) Wow I love the form of this, sweet friend, all the rhyes almost seem to "imbue" into each other like the blues and pinks in cotton candy! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I can't even begin to count all those shades you've painted here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Startime55
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4 posted 2003-05-25 02:42 PM


Sweet love in shades of blue you sing well in this wonderful poem. A total joy to read.

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-05-25 02:55 PM


Ivy Rose - what a beautiful song this would make. "Many shades of blue", I like it, like it a lot. Of whom do you write, if I may be so bold to ask...

BC

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6 posted 2003-05-25 03:23 PM


Ivy, this is beautiful. It really does sound
like a love song.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-05-26 12:47 PM


Love the color,  and how you shaded them to suit you.

Softly soothing, you~  

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8 posted 2003-05-26 02:29 AM


beautiful write
Nan
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9 posted 2003-05-26 07:57 AM


The many shades are just so perfectly Passionately, aren't they?... Nice write, Ivy...

Thanks for the birthday wishes... How far from the Cape are you?..

MikeFessel
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10 posted 2003-05-26 08:06 AM


This is a gorgeous poem, and I love how you take the color blue, so often used to demote sadness, and use it in such a unique fashion here in this love poem. I love blue, and I much prefer your interpretation of its emotional meaning

     Mike

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11 posted 2003-05-26 08:08 AM


Beautifully written--very descriptive. Rich verbiage. A lovely poem.

Warm hugs,
Linda

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12 posted 2003-05-26 01:13 PM


IvyRose~
I adore the shades of your penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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