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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-05-25 02:08 AM


Outside there's
a welcome mat
lying on the floor
inside my finger
covers viewhole
gun against the door

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icebox
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in the shadows
1 posted 2003-05-25 02:11 AM


Ah!  Modern life; I like your style.
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-05-25 02:13 AM


don't shoot! I'm comin' in!
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-05-25 02:14 AM


modern relationships as well..or mine at least..thanks icebox

oops snuck in there thanks dixie..trust me you don't wanna

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (05-25-2003 02:15 AM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-05-25 02:20 AM


so spank me then
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-05-25 02:21 AM


thats meant for a different room..grin
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-05-25 02:22 AM


oooops! sorry
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-25 02:23 AM



littlewing
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New York
8 posted 2003-05-25 08:37 PM


Hey Raph:

just make sure to ask who is at the door
before you shoot . . .

Watch out Dix!  hehe

left me in awe . . .
xxoo

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-05-25 09:16 PM


Raphey??          
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
10 posted 2003-05-26 08:46 PM


grins Dixie thanks for the laugh

Sue you know you've seen the gun before

Ethel thanks and hugs back

littlewing
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New York
11 posted 2003-05-26 10:54 PM


. . . gotcha . . .
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
12 posted 2003-05-28 10:40 AM


Yikes!! I'll be sure and ring the bell, and always step back.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
13 posted 2003-05-28 10:49 AM


remind me not to knock on your door...

M

(I took away my welcome mat years ago...after one person fell on my property  and sued me)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-28-2003 12:18 PM).]

Fading Away
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14 posted 2003-05-28 11:25 AM


I like your style... awesome modernistic viewpoint. Enjoyed.

--Marie

"You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life)

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