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Yitzy
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0 posted 2003-05-24 10:52 PM


Ars Poetica

My poems are my soldiers.
They fight for my future.
I shall leave none behind.
If wounded by an erratic pen,
I shall, in time, mend them,
Fix their shattered limbs,
Mold them to a point
Where they can walk
On their own.

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-24 11:02 PM



ROTFLMAO!
on my 'Arse' with this piece of poetica
hello, nice to meet you!

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2 posted 2003-05-25 12:58 PM


Cool....excellent idea and very well expressed!

I've been doing that with some of my old work, going through and reading with more mature eyes, fixing the jejune mistakes, making 'em into poetry. Feels odd, but darn good.

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