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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Shed this pain Ease this mind Come to me Sing your Angel's lullaby Tonight Speak your truth Within my dreams Caress my very being Tell me That I'm not Holding out just in vain Relinquish this ache Just please Don't shed a tear Out of pity I don't ask for much This much I hope you know I'm just finally Reaching out from The past Shed this pain Ease this ache God, please Come to me Sing your Angel's lullaby Tonight... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-24-2003 09:16 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
really a good write i enjoyed it very much!!! QjQ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you listen very carefully this night as you lie in your bed, you will hear the voices of a choir of heaven's angels singing a lullaby of love, peace, harmony & joy for you. Rest, Sweet Ceinwyn. Sweet dreams. All will be well... EA |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great writing, I love the format of it I have written some in this same way I cant for the life of me do it now. Julie |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Paints a picture almost everyone can relate to. Very well done and thought provoking. I enjoyed reading this. Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. May you see many sunrises, list |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
if he should answer your prayer put in a word for me and let him answer mine |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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