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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-24 10:01 AM



Frayed

fibers undone
not meeting
another line
thread bound
in falter
where strands
lay twisted
with strings
knotted end
fettered to
another days
structure undone


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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-05-24 10:13 AM


sounds like you could use a  hug today.



M

Great writing,as always.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-05-24 01:43 PM


argh...
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-05-24 01:44 PM


well, I'm with you...you be frayed and I'll be frazzled
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-05-24 01:55 PM


smile...there is one I have to dig up for you now and send...but mine is a bit silly.

But what else is new? laughing...

doing those warm-scales now...

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