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The Lioness
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The Lioness |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The Lioness Living in the moment He breathes deep A witness to the innocence of his lovers sleep Sharing of affection recognition of a touch Holding back the wanting and not asking for too much Taking time to know the soul that lives inside watching every quiver that her armor tries to hide So easy just to love her any surface he can buy But getting way beyond that is the challenge of the lie Living in the moment His breathing labors slow There for the taking His restraint will let her know Yes, she can trust him lust and passion she will tame aware of every movement she will play the lion's game... 2003 copywrite SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (05-25-2003 04:51 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Electra, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I truly believe a woman can always tame a mans spirit, moderate the flame to the glow of the moon! (big hugggsssssss) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nicely done. Enjoyed the flow~ M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very charming game! Love, Margherita |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
Excellent!!!! Just a Junkie |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Hi Noah, I had fun with this. Glad you enjoyed. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Margherita, Yes, this is a game of natural skill indeed. Thank you. Just a Junkie, Thank you much.  SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Nakedthoughts, Thank you so much.  SG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! good writing! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Passing Shadows. SG |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A beautiful love poem, SG. This hopeless romantic loved it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
A very considerate and honorable fellah... Hold onto him SG... And one day, you’ll be “Queen Of The Jungle!” lol Nice Write! Richy |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
JamesMichael, thank you. SG Ethel, yes your poetry gives you away. I look for you when I need a lift. Thanks for stopping by. SGRichy, R O A R I just started reading your material. I enjoy and look forward to more. SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (05-25-2003 05:00 AM).] |
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