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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-05-23 07:38 PM




Waves of love my thoughts,
born freely within my heart
they are meant to be caught
by you who watch the stars.

Powerful and endless flow
of this flaming river of blood
divinely guided by the Soul,
created by the breeze of Love.

Like a steadily falling water drop
smoothing the rough stones
each single tear carves the rock
equaling the force of diamonds.

My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

With each breath of Love
with each tear shed in truth
with the language of the heart
I express my feelings for you.

When you ask "do you love me?"
I'll show you the carved rock
for you my bright Light, to see
our indelible immortal melody.


© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-05-23 07:40 PM


I tried to pick a favorite verse, but alas, they are all together as should be. Wonderful. TD
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-05-23 07:58 PM




(smiles) And may this legacy always be carved in stone like hieroglyphics for the blood of love to always remain! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-05-23 08:11 PM


such a beautiful verse:

My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

loved it

~smiles~
M

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-05-23 08:27 PM



How welcome this "rock" feels,
to sit upon, and count the stars
amidst the shusshing of waves...

thank you Margherita....

this was, and is, a very calming,
soothing, read....


garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-05-23 08:45 PM


Margherita, this is so beautiful. I love all
of it...the poem and the picture. But this part is
really special. I  feel  it!!

My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

With each breath of Love
with each tear shed in truth
with the language of the heart
I express my feelings for you.


Yes, I know those feelings  very  well!!
Thank you for a beautiful poem.....
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-23-2003 08:46 PM).]

whiskey
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6 posted 2003-05-23 09:09 PM


What a lovely poem, full of love and emotion, I enjoyed it very much

Julie

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-05-23 09:17 PM


Margherita - as romantic as they come. Nice, nicely done...

BC

SimplyGold
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8 posted 2003-05-23 10:57 PM


Margherita,

"My heartbeats compose words
conceived in a state of grace
to form an eternal verse,
a music of peaceful pace.

With each breath of Love
with each tear shed in truth
with the language of the heart
I express my feelings for you."

I love this, it is beautiful.

SG


Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
9 posted 2003-05-23 11:21 PM


Margherita you always have such a way of capturing beauty in words
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-05-24 03:49 AM


damn beautiful!
Margherita
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Eternity
11 posted 2003-05-24 07:59 PM


Thank you my friends for your kind and generous comments.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-05-25 02:03 AM


I want a carved rock...James
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2003-05-25 06:54 PM


Margherita~
This is wonderful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Magnus
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14 posted 2003-05-25 07:14 PM


Beautifully written, complemented well by
a mere rock...Mere?  No way! Nicely done.

Ericc
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15 posted 2003-05-26 09:52 AM


So beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric

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