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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-05-23 04:44 PM

Saying goodbye
That I believe In
I try my best
To get over with It
But now I know
I do not cry
I try
To say goodbye
Say goodbye to you
Pack my bages
And leaving this old town
of mine
Seems like everything I knew
Saying the things to you
Writing letters to you
Expressing my feelings
That won't let you down
Your love for me
Will always stay
In my heart
I know
Life Is bittersweet
The pleasures
Hours I spend with you
Will always
Stay In my heart
SayIng goodbye to you
My tears falling down
Living It's own time
Giving love away
To the clouds above
Yet time has come now
Saying goodbye
Goodbye to you
Hurting my heart
and soul tonight
Leaving this old town
Saying goodbye

[This message has been edited by vandana (05-23-2003 04:45 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-23 04:48 PM

**Hours I spend with you
Will always
Stay In my heart

nice thoughts and read,

QjQ

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-05-23 04:51 PM

very nice... one small "nit" do you mean bags instead of bages?

the leaving of places where we are connected is never easy... you captured that well here.

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2003-05-23 05:14 PM

A good poem for the bittersweet times of saying goodbye. For though it hurts to say goodbye, it hurts even more to never get a chance to.

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity