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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-05-23 01:44 PM



Billows & Float

Now
Is when snow floats
In camouflage
As cottonwood unleashes
Its white assure
Summer is falling

Now
Comes the hale
Of surprise in skies
When blue was there
Moments ago
Blink, look again,
Billowing white grows in drift
From nothing,

For there is no wind
No push from east or west
North or south,

It is just

Summer
Of billows
& float

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-23 02:00 PM


very nice write "k"

QjQ

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2 posted 2003-05-23 02:26 PM


nice
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3 posted 2003-05-23 05:25 PM


Summer is falling

I love that line!

A warm and hearty write m'dear

enjoyed.

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-05-23 06:22 PM


Beautiful imagery. The summer's presence is felt.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-05-23 06:24 PM


good imagery here
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6 posted 2003-05-23 06:56 PM


Now
Is when snow floats
In camouflage
As cottonwood unleashes
Its white assure
Summer is falling

Now
Comes the hale
Of surprise in skies
When blue was there
Moments ago
Blink, look again,
Billowing white grows in drift
From nothing
=====================

YEP..here too..and I am loving it...
they are one of me fave trees. And it so like you to write what I am thinking

Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that.
Hate cannot drive out hate ... only love can do that.
MLK

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7 posted 2003-05-23 07:11 PM


Karilea, I love this...especially
"summer is falling". That's such a neat line!!
Hugs,  
Ethel

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8 posted 2003-05-23 07:35 PM


What a beautiful blend. Enjoyed the picture.
TD

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9 posted 2003-05-23 07:49 PM


You KNOW I love this...
AND you are one special lady!
~Hugs & Luv, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie
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10 posted 2003-05-23 07:52 PM


Karilea....I hadn't seen cottonwood falling like this until two years ago in the High Sierra's ..it was so beautiful...so is your poem!  
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11 posted 2003-05-23 09:13 PM


'For there is no wind
No push from east or west
North or south,

It is just

Summer
Of billows
& float'

Wish it was so around here, feels like it's been raining forever.
Very cool visuals in this Kari!  

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12 posted 2003-05-23 09:45 PM


The "snow" in the trees...



and the "billows" above...



Thank you, folks, for enjoying this with me...it is a content time, knowing both the soft, and the coming....

except those folks with allergies.  Man, are THEY suffering!!!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-23-2003 09:46 PM).]

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13 posted 2003-05-23 10:07 PM


This is wonderful Very lovely indeed I have never seen snow I enjoyed your picture of it in the trees

Julie

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