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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-05-23 11:44 AM



Ever Concerned

Men, being inquisitive
as men are, wanting
to know
what women talk about,
when they gather
one with one
or grouped in fun…

“what DO you talk about?”

my mind blinked,
what do we talk about,
or of…

let’s see…

children
families
tragedies
realities
necessities
complexities
world situations
imaginings
sorrowings
burrowings
borrowings
lingerings
tinkerings
solutions
resolutions
convolutions
astute intuitions
refined conditions
folk traditions…

but if one were to fill the list
that seals the gist over meals
and drink and makes one blink
would you think that a man
would wink

in understanding?


© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
1 posted 2003-05-23 11:49 AM


You girls talk about all that...in the restroom? Wow.

Jason

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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2 posted 2003-05-23 12:19 PM


K-

They think that we would be a fink?
Well, their brains must be in a kink.
Because that would really surely stink.
And for the record, Karilea, I have never seen a man with a knowing wink!
Perhaps with their brain they do not think!

Yah, Why is it they need to know what we talk about with our female friends?  Like they'd ever understand...

For all of the males poets...I was just kidding!  For all of the female poets (WINK, WINK)

-Patricia

quatro
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3 posted 2003-05-23 12:23 PM


**lol***

It's amazing isn't it, how God has made women so complex yet able to accomplish so many things at once.

Great job Sunshine!

quatro

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-05-23 12:41 PM


And..besides all that, we're great at multi-tasking!

*wink* *wink*

Hugs and love ya hip-sis!

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-05-23 12:48 PM


I've heard women talking and know a few honest enough to let me listen in on some..guys they may show restraint around you but together you have no idea... my god
QjQ
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6 posted 2003-05-23 12:54 PM


gee if this be the case then why ain't they
~~~~~~~~~~  i'm lost for the word?  

QjQ

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-24 03:59 AM


you told the secrets
Magnus
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8 posted 2003-05-24 01:25 PM


Yeah,  now I know what you girls are talking
about all the time...Whewwww!  Boy, am I
relieved....

Nicely done KJ..

kayjay
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9 posted 2003-05-25 09:19 AM


Dear friend and scribe, you well describe
The kind of chatting(You're not catting?)
That men do all the time.
We talk and chat of this and that.
How are the deer and where's the beer?
are not our only whine.

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
10 posted 2003-05-25 09:23 AM


Sunshine
A delightful read, enjoyed.

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-05-25 02:45 PM


Sunshine - now of course I would wink with understanding...

BC

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