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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-05-23 10:42 AM


To market to sell and buy, just a farmer with small plot,
To market beneath blue sky, labor turns gold all wares bought,
Return home to child and wife, robbers come takes gold and life.

Gloom

A Sijo response
To “The Wife Left Behind”



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-05-23 10:46 AM



Ok, it's starting to come together!  Thank you, Professor!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-02-18 02:32 PM


sad but an interesting pair of writes~~

M

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