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LastMoments
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0 posted 2003-05-22 07:49 PM



Our eyes laced themselves
A spiral in between
As the night withdrew our thought
And put us here tonight

I held you once
To watch you go
And now I'm left
A thought of you

Memory is all that stains
The portrait in my mind
Of the time I held
I only held it once

And now I sit here
Staring out my window
The wind whispering
The stars a living tale

How often do I think
And see you in my mind
How often do I find
You lost within my eyes

When will you be here
Again within my grasp

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-22 09:08 PM


very touching write!!!

QjQ

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2 posted 2003-05-22 09:11 PM


I hope you find true love again, great piece


Julie

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3 posted 2003-05-22 09:56 PM


Wow, I think you read my mind tonight!  Very heartfelt and beautiful!

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4 posted 2003-05-22 10:02 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I know how you feel but you will find the perfect love I'm sure as those who wait patiently will find all their hearts deserve! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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***Shakira***

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5 posted 2003-05-23 04:58 AM


a beautiful love poem
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