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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-05-22 05:20 PM


Settled here, the past falls sparkling on in faceless waves
In sunset silver, all of the east gives to the west it saves
The unsure gnarl cast far from shores to tingling lament
Swept free by sea, and down the beaches tide the detrice sent

By backdrop cliffed her figure gleams a proud and stately stance
The mare, her eyes in watchfulness so wide, by fullest chance
Unshaken in my present state, I've come to meet her here
And she to be the likes of me, to meld a spirit mere

Without approach I know her all from fright to freedom bound
In sunset silver mane away on bareback dreams abound
The unsure snarl culled out in place of silken energy
Across the beach upon her guide of carefulness to be

We ride as one her fancy to the higher ground by far
The wind the only entity disturbed or put ajar
Settled here, upon her wise and steadfast heart for sure
In watchful consummation as the waves in sunset stir

Copyright Kkh 5/22/03



[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-22-2003 05:21 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-22 08:40 PM


I see you have been busy...a pleasurable
read on an otherwise damp evening...

Thanx TD!

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2 posted 2003-05-22 09:43 PM


Oh, tremendous write here! This is great!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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3 posted 2003-05-22 09:53 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, how I'd love to ride freely on the grasslands on one of those majestic palominos! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-05-22 11:03 PM


a fabulous write and read,

QjQ

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5 posted 2003-05-23 04:53 AM


you always write such beauty
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