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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87


0 posted 2003-05-22 04:53 PM


the dead and the dying
lie crying on the floor
their hopes and their wishes
shattered and torn
but what can i do
what can i say
the world just keeps on turning
spinning around
i'm trying my best
can you really look
me in the eye
and see a spark somewhere
don't you see the scars
look at me
please
YOU MAY NEVER UNDERSTAND
but, shh, LISTEN
TO THE SILENCE
THE WORDS I CANNOT SAY
i've fought my battles
lost my wars
just like everyone else
yes, just like everyone else
i know
the air is filled with
desperate pleas
and mine is so hard to find
i've cried for my sins
cried for you
cried for me
cried for us
but here i am
begging
on my knees
look me in the eye
and do you see all the world's pain?
the dead and the dying
with shattered hopes
and broken dreams
looking to us for their strength

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-05-22 07:58 PM


Thought this very well written, touching and disturbing.  To understand is difficult, to care to understand is the whole point.
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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2 posted 2003-05-23 04:45 AM


gotta agree with TD here.
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