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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-05-22 08:11 AM



We allow this kiss
to be more.

Expanding in the fullness
of each other -

We surrender.

Becoming as the kiss.

More.




© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Patricia
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1 posted 2003-05-22 08:29 AM


So much passion expressed in so few words.  You are the master of romantic verse, Ericc.

-Patricia

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2 posted 2003-05-22 08:47 AM


Dear Eric ... in this poem the word "More" holds a whole WORLD in it.
Wonderfully stirring.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2003-05-22 09:04 AM


"Becoming as the kiss.

More."


Excellent!! Hugs, Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2003-05-22 09:16 AM



Sheesh.  I keep telling myself...

alone, quiet...

not when there's folks wandering around
wondering why you're sighing at 8:16 CST!!!!

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5 posted 2003-05-22 11:55 AM


The simplicity of words only heightens the brilliance of this.
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6 posted 2003-05-22 03:14 PM


Another good one, Eric.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-05-22 05:18 PM


Boundless.
An extraordinary piece Eric. TD

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8 posted 2003-05-22 05:21 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-05-22 11:47 PM




(smiles) It is always far more than a kiss itself, the kiss is truly an epiphany, a gate opening wide breathing with light to a world of new possibilities! (big hugggsssssss) There's always more than you think there is, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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10 posted 2003-05-23 04:27 AM


always short and sweet
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11 posted 2003-05-23 01:33 PM


Sweet, clear, true beauty... no mistaking the incredible love in your words.

What beautiful magic you weave with words.  Breathtaking... clear, bright, and warmer than blue skies on a sunny day.

You are truly amazing.  

I love you,
Moca

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12 posted 2003-05-23 05:02 PM


Perfectly beautiful
Sandra

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13 posted 2003-05-23 05:17 PM


absolutely beautiful and so perfectly said.

Maree

Etain
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14 posted 2003-05-23 05:22 PM


A kiss for you Poet.
Beautiful.
Love,
Etain, the same.

SimplyGold
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15 posted 2003-05-23 07:52 PM


Hmm.

SG

Nan
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16 posted 2003-05-23 08:13 PM


...Heavenly...

ecrivan
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17 posted 2003-05-23 10:47 PM


nice idea behind the intent to be intimate, enjoyed


teledon
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18 posted 2003-05-24 01:07 AM


I have always believed that "brevity is the soul of wit" .. beautifully
done

"keep it simple"

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19 posted 2003-05-24 01:12 AM


Sweet surrender, great piece.
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20 posted 2003-05-24 10:11 AM


Expanding in the fullness
of each other -

Yes....just so. A pretty little piece of poetry -- captured the moment so well!

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