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Something about Art

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Greeneyes
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0 posted 05-21-2003 11:30 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


White fences
      fireflies striking light:

--We lit candles  random color
       liquid gliding      just before stars arrived; {in}
layer after layer fading daylight

Tonight the world will whisper
something about art:
love songs in many voices,
immortal shado
ws-- I will
only vaguely recall
            the orchid smell of your skin
in combinations of night and glow
              as if on faith

sentence by sentence

between dark shores
       &no solid ground

bolts of silk
   lovely and moving
because I love a dangerousmemory


Tonight there are            mirrors
on the side walk;
petals
falling on cathedral steps


Still now, I know what you were
                     Thinking:
we were cloud and shadow
        moving over snow

you were the last word


Through the darkness
I can see your light
And you will always shine
And I can feel your heart in mine

I will remember you




[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-21-2003 11:36 PM).]

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1 posted 05-21-2003 11:34 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) I think we all need these dangerous memories, sweet friend, without them what can we create and the art is all bland! (kiss on cheek) Always cherish those lovely memories and breathe those remaining leaves of the orchids and crocus, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, I'm so happy you're back posting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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--We lit candles  random color
       liquid gliding      just before stars arrived; {in}
layer after layer fading daylight

Tonight the world will whisper
something about art:
love songs in many voices,
immortal shadows-- I will
only vaguely recall
            the orchid smell of your skin
in combinations of night and glow
              as if on faith

sentence by sentence

between dark shores
       =========
Tonight there are            mirrors
on the side walk; petals
falling on cathedral steps


Still now, I know what you were
                     Thinking:
we were cloud and shadow
        moving over snow

you were the last word


================================


god I love your poetry...
and needed to read you tonite...
more than I even realized till the words fell into me mothy heart.
Stunningly lovely write Lauren...
Butterfly whispers baby...
yeah...you know.

I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality.
MLK

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3 posted 05-22-2003 12:22 AM       View Profile for ecrivan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ecrivan's Home Page   View IP for ecrivan

like the picture your words paint, and the little snippits here and there laced together

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4 posted 05-22-2003 02:11 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful piece, I enjoyed reading it alot

Julie
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awesome write!
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bolts of silk
   lovely and moving
because I love a dangerousmemory


Tonight there are            mirrors
on the side walk; petals
falling on cathedral steps


Still now, I know what you were
                     Thinking:
we were cloud and shadow
        moving over snow

you were the last word


Goodness Lauren, this is beautiful!!
I wish I could write like this...
Hugs,  
Ethel
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7 posted 05-22-2003 08:39 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Lady.... you have no idea what your words touch in me...

thank you for that...
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8 posted 05-22-2003 09:21 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh my Lauren...
You are the last word!
This is amazingly beautiful!
Love your work...may I ask for more please?
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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we were cloud and shadow
        moving over snow

you were the last word

~*~

Teach me graceful...
please?
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Greeneyes - your poetry is indeed art...

BC
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yes, there is something about this. . . being as it is art. . . and, to paraphrase, there's something about you as well. . .

wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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The last word often leaves a dangerous memory~ and you dear Lauren, inspire the risk, raising the level of excitement.

Congratulations,  5000 times over and over~
So pretty is the vision through your eyes~
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First of all ~ it is very good to read you again...you have been gone for quite some time, I do believe.

When I read your poetry it reminds me of the lyrics of my favorite modern band...still.

Tonight the world will whisper
something about art:
love songs in many voices,
immortal shadows-- I will
only vaguely recall
            the orchid smell of your skin
in combinations of night and glow
              as if on faith


~ That segment above was my favorite.
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nice
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Missed your words, write more
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fabulous write!!!

QjQ

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'Tonight there are            mirrors
on the side walk; petals
falling on cathedral steps


Still now, I know what you were
                     Thinking:
we were cloud and shadow
        moving over snow

you were the last word'

Wow.  And believe me, I feel like an idiot saying that but that's all I can think to say.  LOL  This is how I aspire to write...
It will be a long, long climb, I'm afraid.  
Really enjoyed this!
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Something about YOUR art.....

....makes me read every word you write, and try to understand the power and beauty of it, so I may capture an echo in my own.

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