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Patricia
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0 posted 2003-05-21 10:35 PM


Senseless

Translucent ray
Opaque gray
Uncolored day

Spiced distaste
Bland baste
Bittered waste

Without perfume
Odorless gloom
Unscented tomb

Acoustics bound
Deafening sound
Silenced ground

Numbed touch
Emotional crutch
Iced clutch

In regress,
I digress...
Senseless


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-21 10:50 PM


i enjoyed this,  it has my attention.

A thought from a stranger is cherished,
A thought from a friend is treasured

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-05-21 10:58 PM


Your "Senseless" is sad--but absolutely sensational!

Healing hugs,
Linda

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-05-22 09:20 AM



Don't you just hug it
when nonsensical "stuff"
is perfectly understood?

Me do!

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-05-22 09:55 AM


Patricia - h'mmm, two words per line, nice. And much meaning to them, must have taken a while to write...

BC

quatro
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5 posted 2003-05-22 11:17 AM


Patricia,

You have done well here and have captured my senses.  Keep up the good work.

quatro

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6 posted 2003-05-22 01:06 PM


cool write!
Richy
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7 posted 2003-05-22 02:03 PM




For Patricia


Senseful

Brilliant beam
Glistening stream
Vivid dream

Pleasing zest
Love attest
Unprofessed

Fragrant Scent
Sheer content
Heaven sent

Silent mood
Interlude
Gratitude

Grazing feel
Soft appeal
Gentle heal

Beautiful
Meaningful
Senseful


Patricia, I hope soon, you receive all the happiness you deserve...

Wonderful write!


Richy

[This message has been edited by Richy (05-22-2003 02:03 PM).]

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